The Physiology of a Swollen Heart

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:26 PM

daiofwireppoujedpdrpj

Seriously??? · April 13th, 2007, 06:27 PM

very nice....the chocolate i'm havin i mean.

Seriously???

Spiky · April 13th, 2007, 06:27 PM

Yeah..I logged onto RD just so that I would read all that shit by Princess Ligi.

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Spiky

Yeah..I logged onto RD just so that I would read all that shit by Princess Ligi.

I wouldnt give a crap if you did or not

chutney whore · April 13th, 2007, 06:30 PM

Last paragraph reminds me of Roald Dahls "Red riding hood"
(the way you wrote i mean)

i like

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:31 PM

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Originally Posted by chutney whore

Last paragraph reminds me of Roald Dahls "Red riding hood"
(the way you wrote i mean)

i like

Hmm, Ive never read that. I lvoe Roald Dahl though, he was my favorite author when I was a kid

Fight_Tibet · April 13th, 2007, 06:32 PM

get rid of all the romance refrence...keep it more an obsession piece

i refuse to believe you dint have someone in mind when you wrote this

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Fight_Tibet

get rid of all the romance refrence...keep it more an obsession piece

i refuse to believe you dint have someone in mind when you wrote this

But the man is the obsession... snd whe's trying to block him out with her research. Im actually planning on performing this at a spoken word thing at UofH.

And no, its just a character

chutney whore · April 13th, 2007, 06:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Princess_Ligi

Hmm, Ive never read that. I lvoe Roald Dahl though, he was my favorite author when I was a kid

i memorised it for a play when i was younger, it owns:

http://www.cupola.com/html/wordplay/redride1.htm

Fight_Tibet · April 13th, 2007, 06:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Princess_Ligi

But the man is the obsession... snd whe's trying to block him out with her research. Im actually planning on performing this at a spoken word thing at UofH.

And no, its just a character

yeah hence i'm saying get rid of the romance and hone in on the obsession...

you cant pull characters out of thin air...they always need a reference point

chutney whore · April 13th, 2007, 06:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Fight_Tibet

yeah hence i'm saying get rid of the romance and hone in on the obsession...

you cant pull characters out of thin air...they always need a reference point

the romance makes it silly, if it was purely obsession it would obviously be much darker?

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Fight_Tibet

yeah hence i'm saying get rid of the romance and hone in on the obsession...

you cant pull characters out of thin air...they always need a reference point

but the romance is the whole point of it?

and yes you can pull characters out of thin air, I do it all the time.

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:53 PM

And the haters have entered the thread, I've been expecting you.

KashytheCableGuy · April 13th, 2007, 06:53 PM

It's lovely.

"Paper cuts of knowledge on my feet and in my mind."

Brilliant.

Fight_Tibet · April 13th, 2007, 06:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Princess_Ligi

but the romance is the whole point of it?

and yes you can pull characters out of thin air, I do it all the time.

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 06:57 PM

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Originally Posted by KashytheCableGuy

It's lovely.

"Paper cuts of knowledge on my feet and in my mind."

Brilliant.

What? You being nice? This is a trick, right?

KashytheCableGuy · April 13th, 2007, 06:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Fight_Tibet

yeah hence i'm saying get rid of the romance and hone in on the obsession...

you cant pull characters out of thin air...they always need a reference point

What are you talking about? She said it's supposed to be a bit silly .

"The constituents enclosed in his fragrance raise the hairs on my back and clam up my hands."

This was probably my favorite part.

KashytheCableGuy · April 13th, 2007, 07:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Princess_Ligi

What? You being nice? This is a trick, right?

It's no trick, I promise you, from the bottom of my epithelial tissue!

hindu_heat · April 13th, 2007, 07:00 PM

you've actually got talent.

one of the few people on here that i actually respect.

poojasxy · April 13th, 2007, 07:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Princess_Ligi

I wrote this at the hospital during my lunch break and no its not about me, just a character I made up. And yes its supposed to be a bit silly.

aaaawww.... ligi.

Space-Cowboy · April 13th, 2007, 07:16 PM

Oh how I recall that special time in my youth

Whence I would stroll freely in the park
And, as hapless wanderers drifted by,
I would present them with a noteworthy specimen
of my own feces

Oh how I loved to defecate on park benches
Such was the revelry of my youth
With each magnificent member of the greater stool of my anal vestibule,
I orchestrated a symphony of excretory sights and sounds!
And such a symphony it was!

But today, every piece of excrement serves as a poignant reminder
of a golden age now long gone
Oh how I’m taunted by my past, as I’m pierced with arrows of nostalgia
The burning pain in my heart,
A sheer mockery of the burning pleasure in my anus
From that so special a time…

Mere memories, nothing more…

I'm very proud of myself right now.

**Sikh4Lyfe** · April 13th, 2007, 08:12 PM

Next time post cliffs you stupid fuck.

Princess_Ligi · April 13th, 2007, 11:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Space-Cowboy

Oh how I recall that special time in my youth

Whence I would stroll freely in the park
And, as hapless wanderers drifted by,
I would present them with a noteworthy specimen
of my own feces

Oh how I loved to defecate on park benches
Such was the revelry of my youth
With each magnificent member of the greater stool of my anal vestibule,
I orchestrated a symphony of excretory sights and sounds!
And such a symphony it was!

But today, every piece of excrement serves as a poignant reminder
of a golden age now long gone
Oh how I’m taunted by my past, as I’m pierced with arrows of nostalgia
The burning pain in my heart,
A sheer mockery of the burning pleasure in my anus
From that so special a time…

Mere memories, nothing more…

I'm very proud of myself right now.

LOL gross

Princess_Ligi · April 14th, 2007, 12:02 AM

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Originally Posted by Sikh4Lyfe

Next time post cliffs you stupid fuck.

I forget that your cognitive capacity is paralleled to that of a dingbat.

Princess_Ligi · April 14th, 2007, 12:07 AM

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Originally Posted by hindu_heat

you've actually got talent.

one of the few people on here that i actually respect.

Aww that means alot to me, thanks.

April 13th, 2007, 06:26 PM	#1
Princess_Ligi Should I Consider Retiring??? Join Date: Dec 13 2004 Posts: 22,484 Reputation: 641055202 --> Rep Power: 64105628 Casino cash: $44278	The Physiology of a Swollen Heart daiofwireppoujedpdrpj Last edited by Princess_Ligi : June 25th, 2007 at 11:11 PM.

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Seriously??? Banned Join Date: Apr 11 2007 Posts: 300 Reputation: 10 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $1000	very nice....the chocolate i'm havin i mean. Seriously???

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Fight_Tibet Banned Join Date: Jan 27 2007 Location: Oak_Town Posts: 9,999 Reputation: 10 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $1000	get rid of all the romance refrence...keep it more an obsession piece i refuse to believe you dint have someone in mind when you wrote this

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Princess_Ligi Should I Consider Retiring??? Join Date: Dec 13 2004 Posts: 22,484 Reputation: 641055202 --> Rep Power: 64105628 Casino cash: $44278	And the haters have entered the thread, I've been expecting you.

April 13th, 2007, 06:53 PM	#14
KashytheCableGuy Banned Join Date: Mar 16 2007 Posts: 464 Reputation: 10 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $20208	It's lovely. "Paper cuts of knowledge on my feet and in my mind." Brilliant.

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hindu_heat Lame Join Date: Jul 12 2004 Location: Ottawa, Canada Posts: 6,806 Reputation: 0 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $1000	you've actually got talent. one of the few people on here that i actually respect.

April 13th, 2007, 07:16 PM	#21
Space-Cowboy Banned Join Date: Feb 1 2005 Location: 9th Layer Posts: 35,485 Reputation: 8193035 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $31968	Oh how I recall that special time in my youth Whence I would stroll freely in the park And, as hapless wanderers drifted by, I would present them with a noteworthy specimen of my own feces Oh how I loved to defecate on park benches Such was the revelry of my youth With each magnificent member of the greater stool of my anal vestibule, I orchestrated a symphony of excretory sights and sounds! And such a symphony it was! But today, every piece of excrement serves as a poignant reminder of a golden age now long gone Oh how I’m taunted by my past, as I’m pierced with arrows of nostalgia The burning pain in my heart, A sheer mockery of the burning pleasure in my anus From that so special a time… Mere memories, nothing more… I'm very proud of myself right now.

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