RIP Karim

shamera · October 5th, 2006, 12:13 AM

About a year and half ago, I lost my best friend in the whole world. He died in a car accident and I'm missing him a lot for some reason...right now. Anyway, I had written this a while back and while I'm not a poet, I'm sure several of you can relate to this poem. Hope you can take it seriously and appreciate it. If not, be kind enough not to disrespect those who are not with us today.

A Temporary Goodbye.

You're gone, you're dead. Good Bye.
You left me all alone in this scary place,
And now you rest and smile, below 6 feet, in your case.
I tell myself to forget you, really I do try.
You broke so many promises, why did you lie?
The thought of you makes my heart race.
A car crash, a disaster that left no trace.
You sleep, you smile, I cry and...I cry.

I read teh engraving "a great friend",
And there goes another tear.
Friends never leave, they stay true.
You made a new fashion, set a new trend,
To raise hopes, makes promises, and then disappear.
So a temporary goodbye right now should do.
Until the next time, when I get to see you.

June 7, 1988- June 19, 2005

punjabi*princess · October 5th, 2006, 12:18 AM

aww im sorry but thats soo sweet of u .. hope everything goes well

WildWolfdog · October 5th, 2006, 12:22 AM

awww

shamera · October 5th, 2006, 12:24 AM

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Originally Posted by punjabi*princess

aww im sorry but thats soo sweet of u .. hope everything goes well

Thanks and thanks Basil.

dayven · October 5th, 2006, 12:25 AM

so sad.....R.I.P.

btown-paki · October 5th, 2006, 12:26 AM

that made me e-tear

so beautiful

Spiky · October 5th, 2006, 12:27 AM

GT & MK KING · October 5th, 2006, 12:28 AM

so sad...may he rest in peace

good poem u wrote btw

HIK213 · October 5th, 2006, 12:31 AM

nice poem, R.I.P

**Spork** · October 5th, 2006, 12:36 AM

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Originally Posted by punjabi*princess

aww im sorry but thats soo sweet of u .. hope everything goes well

shamera · October 5th, 2006, 12:38 AM

Thanks you guys. I guess it just helps to get it out of your system sometimes.

SIXPAK GQ · October 5th, 2006, 01:03 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shamera

About a year and half ago, I lost my best friend in the whole world. He died in a car accident and I'm missing him a lot for some reason...right now. Anyway, I had written this a while back and while I'm not a poet, I'm sure several of you can relate to this poem. Hope you can take it seriously and appreciate it. If not, be kind enough not to disrespect those who are not with us today.

A Temporary Goodbye.

You're gone, you're dead. Good Bye.
You left me all alone in this scary place,
And now you rest and smile, below 6 feet, in your case.
I tell myself to forget you, really I do try.
You broke so many promises, why did you lie?
The thought of you makes my heart race.
A car crash, a disaster that left no trace.
You sleep, you smile, I cry and...I cry.

I read teh engraving "a great friend",
And there goes another tear.
Friends never leave, they stay true.
You made a new fashion, set a new trend,
To raise hopes, makes promises, and then disappear.
So a temporary goodbye right now should do.
Until the next time, when I get to see you.

June 7, 1988- June 19, 2005

was he ismaili??

shamera · October 5th, 2006, 01:07 AM

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Originally Posted by SIXPAK GQ

was he ismaili??

Yes. He was in Security.

GT & MK KING · October 5th, 2006, 01:10 AM

it's hard to lose someone ur close to.

sorry for ur loss.

SIXPAK GQ · October 5th, 2006, 01:10 AM

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Originally Posted by shamera

Yes. He was in Security.

yea i thought i heard about that in JK somwhere.

NeRgYz · October 5th, 2006, 01:12 AM

aaawww, shamera....i understand how u feel

.....this is my first Ramadan wit out my grandfather.... and i already missed him so much

SIXPAK GQ · October 5th, 2006, 01:14 AM

i dont even really how how it feels to have a father. dont even have a grandfather now

NeRgYz · October 5th, 2006, 01:16 AM

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Originally Posted by SIXPAK GQ

i dont even really how how it feels to have a father. dont even have a grandfather now

seriously, i dont like these kind of topics......its jus too sad....

**Whizkid786** · October 5th, 2006, 01:23 AM

Was he DUI?

gorjuzkuri · October 5th, 2006, 01:29 AM

i lost someone as well...in a wreck...a 25 yr old. best friend/ bhabi....who left behind a two year old daughter...and a 5 years old marriage...in which she had only gotten to be with her husband for about 3 years...since she got to come over here after two years of her marriage. And, as hard as it was...i cant seem to forget that day. You never realize that young people can die...until someone passes away. We had become so ignorant to the fact that young people do die...not just old people. And, i guess that was a way for God to show us the right path. Ever since then everyone in our towns gotten really interested into our religion. Sometimes, i think of it as a sign or act of a way to better the community. Whatever it was...i just wish it never happened!

GT & MK KING · October 5th, 2006, 01:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gorjuzkuri

i lost someone as well...in a wreck...a 25 yr old. best friend/ bhabi....who left behind a two year old daughter...and a 5 years old marriage...in which she had only gotten to be with her husband for about 3 years...since she got to come over here after two years of her marriage. And, as hard as it was...i cant seem to forget that day. You never realize that young people can die...until someone passes away. We had become so ignorant to the fact that young people do die...not just old people. And, i guess that was a way for God to show us the right path. Ever since then everyone in our towns gotten really interested into our religion. Sometimes, i think of it as a sign or act of a way to better the community. Whatever it was...i just wish it never happened!

sorry for ur loss..how r u holding up?

i lost my lil sister that i didnt know about and my dad's father past away too...i miss them very much

**Whizkid786** · October 5th, 2006, 01:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gorjuzkuri

i lost someone as well...in a wreck...a 25 yr old. best friend/ bhabi....who left behind a two year old daughter...and a 5 years old marriage...in which she had only gotten to be with her husband for about 3 years...since she got to come over here after two years of her marriage. And, as hard as it was...i cant seem to forget that day. You never realize that young people can die...until someone passes away. We had become so ignorant to the fact that young people do die...not just old people. And, i guess that was a way for God to show us the right path. Ever since then everyone in our towns gotten really interested into our religion. Sometimes, i think of it as a sign or act of a way to better the community. Whatever it was...i just wish it never happened!

Wow, that's insane. Sorry to hear that.

shamera · October 5th, 2006, 01:35 AM

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Originally Posted by SIXPAK GQ

yea i thought i heard about that in JK somwhere.

I'm sure. It was everywhere.

shamera · October 5th, 2006, 01:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NeRgYz

aaawww, shamera....i understand how u feel

.....this is my first Ramadan wit out my grandfather.... and i already missed him so much

It hurts doesn't it?

SIXPAK GQ · October 5th, 2006, 01:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NeRgYz

seriously, i dont like these kind of topics......its jus too sad....

they are reality. face it.

October 5th, 2006, 12:13 AM	#1
shamera Should I Consider Retiring??? Join Date: Oct 21 2005 Location: Dallas Posts: 10,577 Reputation: 4772372 --> Rep Power: 477295 Casino cash: $2533	RIP Karim About a year and half ago, I lost my best friend in the whole world. He died in a car accident and I'm missing him a lot for some reason...right now. Anyway, I had written this a while back and while I'm not a poet, I'm sure several of you can relate to this poem. Hope you can take it seriously and appreciate it. If not, be kind enough not to disrespect those who are not with us today. A Temporary Goodbye. You're gone, you're dead. Good Bye. You left me all alone in this scary place, And now you rest and smile, below 6 feet, in your case. I tell myself to forget you, really I do try. You broke so many promises, why did you lie? The thought of you makes my heart race. A car crash, a disaster that left no trace. You sleep, you smile, I cry and...I cry. I read teh engraving "a great friend", And there goes another tear. Friends never leave, they stay true. You made a new fashion, set a new trend, To raise hopes, makes promises, and then disappear. So a temporary goodbye right now should do. Until the next time, when I get to see you. June 7, 1988- June 19, 2005 __________________ erm.no.

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punjabi*princess Can't Stay Away Join Date: Jan 14 2006 Location: New York Posts: 2,439 Reputation: 6919859 --> Rep Power: 692009 Casino cash: $7734	aww im sorry but thats soo sweet of u .. hope everything goes well

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GT & MK KING Banned Join Date: Feb 9 2005 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 25,002 Reputation: 197969341 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $23428	so sad...may he rest in peace good poem u wrote btw

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GT & MK KING Banned Join Date: Feb 9 2005 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 25,002 Reputation: 197969341 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $23428	it's hard to lose someone ur close to. sorry for ur loss. Last edited by GT & MK KING : October 30th, 2006 at 12:20 AM.

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NeRgYz Should I Consider Retiring??? Join Date: Feb 17 2006 Posts: 8,082 Reputation: 10 --> Rep Power: 48 Casino cash: $1100	aaawww, shamera....i understand how u feel .....this is my first Ramadan wit out my grandfather.... and i already missed him so much

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SIXPAK GQ Banned Join Date: Aug 1 2004 Location: Houston, TX // San Jose, CA Posts: 24,127 Reputation: 0 --> Rep Power: 0 Casino cash: $1000	i dont even really how how it feels to have a father. dont even have a grandfather now

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October 5th, 2006, 01:29 AM	#20
gorjuzkuri Should I Consider Retiring??? Join Date: Aug 14 2006 Posts: 6,289 Reputation: 21548 --> Rep Power: 2192 Casino cash: $8991	i lost someone as well...in a wreck...a 25 yr old. best friend/ bhabi....who left behind a two year old daughter...and a 5 years old marriage...in which she had only gotten to be with her husband for about 3 years...since she got to come over here after two years of her marriage. And, as hard as it was...i cant seem to forget that day. You never realize that young people can die...until someone passes away. We had become so ignorant to the fact that young people do die...not just old people. And, i guess that was a way for God to show us the right path. Ever since then everyone in our towns gotten really interested into our religion. Sometimes, i think of it as a sign or act of a way to better the community. Whatever it was...i just wish it never happened! Last edited by gorjuzkuri : October 5th, 2006 at 01:35 AM.

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