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Old August 26th, 2005, 09:54 AM   #1
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ok ok guys iv seen loadsa thread on many of the talented guys/gals are all on the MC's threads....

This thread is strictly for Urdu poetry lovers....

So start posting....

I'll get da ball rollin....

kissi se na poocho, yeh fiza hi tho hai,
ik tehratha hua kissa, mere lahmon ka jazbaath hi tho hai,
tez hai magr hawa, ik nasha sa hi tho hai,
hawa hai fiza ki tara, kissa jazbaath ki tarah, lekin zindagi meri hi tho hai
ik ghoomtha hua safar, mere naam ka hi tho hai,
pechaan aap se lekin dosti ka parcha mera gumnaam hi tho hai,
meh alag sa hoon magar ik roz sochtha hoon....
aap door jo hain meri kismath ka yeh anjaam hi tho hai
woh maanthe nahi humari, iss me ik mehmaan sa hoon me,
woh kehthe hai har roz likho, is me tum batao meri jaan si tho hai,
me sab kuch jaan ke bi unjaan yeh mera kissa hai magar,
likh likh ke chala jaao, yeh koi samaan tho nahee hai!!!
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Old August 26th, 2005, 09:58 AM   #2
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very nice

mine seem pathetic compared to yours....
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Old August 26th, 2005, 09:59 AM   #3
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dont even get me started.
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Old August 26th, 2005, 10:00 AM   #4
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Aww...thats beautiful...

I'm not posting mine
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Old August 26th, 2005, 10:02 AM   #5
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c'mon u can start

thas tha reason i made tha thread lol
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Old August 26th, 2005, 10:02 AM   #6
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Aww...thats beautiful...

I'm not posting mine
we aint competing at all

just wanna highlight everyones talents...

so give it a shot
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Naseeb waloun ko milta he pyaar ke badle pyaar...
wafa ke badle wafaa..
Dil to nadaan he kisi ka bhi ho jata he...
Iska koi hota he kahan...
Dil ke armaan ansoun ke saath beh jate hein...
Bohat kam log jisko chahte hein usko patein hein..
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Naseeb waloun ko milta he pyaar ke badle pyaar...
wafa ke badle wafaa..
Dil to nadaan he kisi ka bhi ho jata he...
Iska koi hota he kahan...
Dil ke armaan ansoun ke saath beh jate hein...
Bohat kam log jisko chahte hein usko patein hein..
NICE! did u write that?
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Old August 26th, 2005, 10:08 AM   #9
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dont hate.. appriciate.. get started ***** i want u to
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Old August 26th, 2005, 10:09 AM   #10
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NICE! did u write that?
salla flirt..
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dont hate.. appriciate.. get started ***** i want u to
do you want me to write something romantic or disgusting?
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lol go for romantic
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shayed unn ka aakhri ho yeh sitam,
sitam sitam kar ke hum seh gaye,
dua bi ki, door se wafa bi ki,
lekin phir bi tanha se hum reh gaye,
raukha bohat, iss dil ko, ruak ruak ke haar gaye,
jin ko dil se chaha, woh kisi aur ke dil me samaa gaye,
ab jeene ki faida sirf aik raha,
sitam ho akhri, yeh soch soch kar ansoo humara aa gaye
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Old August 26th, 2005, 10:22 AM   #16
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khuda ne kya karamat di logo ko hai..
poetry karte hai to achhi karte hai..
kaash humare paas bhi ek naya sa keyboard hota..
ya fir Ctrl button chalta apne keyboard pe..
ek tamanna thi ke hum bhi kuch google karte hai..
aur iss thread me kuch copy pest karte hai..
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khuda ne kya karamat di logo ko hai..
poetry karte hai to achhi karte hai..
kaash humare paas bhi ek naya sa keyboard hota..
ya fir Ctrl button chalta apne keyboard pe..
ek tamanna thi ke hum bhi kuch google karte hai..
aur iss thread me kuch copy pest karte hai..
hahahahah google karte hai aur iss thread me kuch paste karte hain!!!! lol!
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jiss par hum dil-o-jaan sai martay thai
wo nahi thi humaray pyaar k kaabil
shakal sai lagti thee wo farishta
mager ander sai thee wo aik kaatil
hansi thee jaisay ho aik ghulaab
baddan tha jaisay ho bottle sharab ki
nasheeli ankhon sai mujhay maarti thi wo
nai nai tareeko sai bed mai boolati thee wo
kaash mai uss sai milla na hota
to shayad zindagi sai hota na itna baizaar
aaj kal to soch soch k hua houn mai baihaal
harr aik hanseen chehray k peechay dhountata houn mai pyaar
abb to uth gaya hai iss duniya par se mera aitabaar
kaash mujhay mill sakkay sachin ki tarah ka pyaar. <3

something i wrote with quicknesss
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jiss par hum dil-o-jaan sai martay thai
wo nahi thi humaray pyaar k kaabil
shakal sai lagti thee wo farishta
mager ander sai thee wo aik kaatil
hansi thee jaisay ho aik ghulaab
baddan tha jaisay ho bottle sharab ki
nasheeli ankhon sai mujhay maarti thi wo
nai nai tareeko sai bed mai boolati thee wo
kaash mai uss sai milla na hota
to shayad zindagi sai hota na itna baizaar
aaj kal to soch soch k hua houn mai baihaal
harr aik hanseen chehray k peechay dhountata houn mai pyaar
abb to uth gaya hai iss duniya par se mera aitabaar
kaash mujhay mill sakkay sachin ki tarah ka pyaar. <3

something i wrote with quicknesss
u cant have semething 100% non pervert

i like the last line
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ke tum se pehley koi talab nahen thi
hamen jahan ki kisi gharz se gharz nahen thi
ham apney se hi ik jahan mein bas rahey the

be bas nahen the, tum jo nahen the

jo chaho ker lo, jesa bhi ker lo, jahan bhi kar lo,
aur na bhi kartey, fikr nahen thi

hamari khuwahish, hamara rastaa, hamari manzil,kahin nahen thi,
jo kuch bhi khoya, jo kuch bhi paya,
khushi jo na thi, to gham bhi na thaa
sarab saarey simat gaye hein

hamari ighraz hamari fikren hamari khushyan hamarey sab gham
hamari dharrkan hamari chahat hamari manzil kahin nahen thi

"hamara sab kuch hai ab tumhara"
aur tum hamarey

jo tum ne chaha wo hum ne mana, jo ham ne chaha wo tum ne mana
na tum wo ham ho na ham wo tum hein, bas "aik hi hein"

tou faasley kyun?
jaantey ho?
judaii is pal mein kia karey gi..
kahin naa jaao..
bas mere paas laut aao

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ke tum se pehley koi talab nahen thi
hamen jahan ki kisi gharz se gharz nahen thi
ham apney se hi ik jahan mein bas rahey the

be bas nahen the, tum jo nahen the

jo chaho ker lo, jesa bhi ker lo, jahan bhi kar lo,
aur na bhi kartey, fikr nahen thi

hamari khuwahish, hamara rastaa, hamari manzil,kahin nahen thi,
jo kuch bhi khoya, jo kuch bhi paya,
khushi jo na thi, to gham bhi na thaa
sarab saarey simat gaye hein

hamari ighraz hamari fikren hamari khushyan hamarey sab gham
hamari dharrkan hamari chahat hamari manzil kahin nahen thi

"hamara sab kuch hai ab tumhara"
aur tum hamarey

jo tum ne chaha wo hum ne mana, jo ham ne chaha wo tum ne mana
na tum wo ham ho na ham wo tum hein, bas "aik hi hein"

tou faasley kyun?
jaantey ho?
judaii is pal mein kia karey gi..
kahin naa jaao..
bas mere paas laut aao

aah bhi jaao
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URDU KI BOOK Mai Likha Hai..
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