peoms

[vin r]

i was a lil upset so i wrote this poem about this girl i know its a lil corny and im not a poet but i like it tell me wat u think....


I try to distance myself from you
But for some reason u stay on my mind
I don’t know why you use to lie to me
When you use to tell me I am on your mind
I know I am nothing to you
And you don’t care if you have me in your life
But to me you are everything
And I don’t know why
So I sit here with u on my mind
and wonder why
Was it the first time I saw u
Or when I last looked in your eyes
I was lost for words when I kissed you
And simply lost when I said goodbye
Sucks to be me
And you’re the reason why

[vin r]

bfore anyone says anything i know i spelt the tittle wrong it should say poems sorry

[amani]

it is very cute, i like it a lot. sorry some girl is being a bia bia to you.

[amani]

it's really sad, too. omg. :crying:

[brownieman]

emo, move on

[reggie_xox]

urgh I don't know why people get all emotional and in love, if the girl hurt you why on earth are you still weeping over her? She obviously isnt worth the time darling, build a bridge...- you know the rest.

[~whatever~]

It's not bad, but i really like the last two lines ..

Suck to me be
And you're the reason why.


Catchy to say the least. haha

[htown_pimpette]

i was a lil upset so i wrote this poem about this girl i know its a lil corny and im not a poet but i like it tell me wat u think....


I try to distance myself from you
But for some reason u stay on my mind
I don’t know why you use to lie to me
When you use to tell me I am on your mind
I know I am nothing to you
And you don’t care if you have me in your life
But to me you are everything
And I don’t know why
So I sit here with u on my mind
and wonder why
Was it the first time I saw u
Or when I last looked in your eyes
I was lost for words when I kissed you
And simply lost when I said goodbye
Sucks to be me
And you’re the reason why

wow yo das deep like ferreal.... i like it homie:-D

[ezbreezyfresh]

i know who u r..and what are you doing on rd??? thats funny! i didn't think you were into desis at all..at least back in the days u weren't..lol

[vin r]

o really how do u kno me? who r u? im really not that into desis this poem wasnt about one but i was curious so i came to this site

[arooba]

this is cute i like it.infact...its what i be feelin too. sucks to be me too

[KingsOfLeon]

Im not knocking your creativity but DESI women do not deserve a poem like that!

[vin r]

she aint desi haha

[Anbuitachix]

werd the last two lines were def dope

[ezbreezyfresh]

o really how do u kno me? who r u? im really not that into desis this poem wasnt about one but i was curious so i came to this site

lol curious about what? ur family is pretty damn desi..so what are you so curious about??and im pretty sure u know me too..but lets not get into that...id like to stay anonymous..

=)

[ezbreezyfresh]

she aint desi haha

lol how much u wana bet your goign to end up wit ha desi chick?

[vin r]

im pretty sure i will...not gonna lie haha

[ezbreezyfresh]

im pretty sure i will...not gonna lie haha

lol see..it's time to embrace ur desiness!!

[vin r]

lol see..it's time to embrace ur desiness!!



and how would i be doin that?

[ezbreezyfresh]

and how would i be doin that?

lol i dunno..make more desi friends? listen to the msuic etc? learn about your culture and history..and what not? because in the end no matter what you are always judged by ur ethinicity...so u might as well have come knowledge and not look liek a dumbass when someone asks u abt ur culture..u know?

[vin r]

I have yet to find a desi girl I'm attracted too idk about desi friends either other desis tend not to like me for some reason haha



lol i dunno..make more desi friends? listen to the msuic etc? learn about your culture and history..and what not? because in the end no matter what you are always judged by ur ethinicity...so u might as well have come knowledge and not look liek a dumbass when someone asks u abt ur culture..u know?

[ezbreezyfresh]

I have yet to find a desi girl I'm attracted too idk about desi friends either other desis tend not to like me for some reason haha

lol you know why that is? coz u act like u are ashamed to be desi or something..and u give off this snobby vibe..like ur better than the other desis out there...just be more approachable and u just might find some cool desi friends

[vin r]

lol you know why that is? coz u act like u are ashamed to be desi or something..and u give off this snobby vibe..like ur better than the other desis out there...just be more approachable and u just might find some cool desi friends


i am very approachable desis just dont approach me haha

[X2CwitSoNii]

vin r ur pretty

[vin r]

vin r ur pretty


thank u :D

[Siesta]

thank u :D
So did you stop writing? Post some more homie

[ezbreezyfresh]

i am very approachable desis just dont approach me haha

ok the next time i see you..i'll say hi! just maybe !!! lol

[vin.]

We got similar username.

[vin r]

ok the next time i see you..i'll say hi! just maybe !!! lol

do u see me that often?

[ezbreezyfresh]

do u see me that often?

yes.....:D

[vin r]

And how often is it that u see me and where?


yes.....:D

[diesel4you]

i was a lil upset so i wrote this poem about this girl i know its a lil corny and im not a poet but i like it tell me wat u think....


I try to distance myself from you
But for some reason u stay on my mind
I don’t know why you use to lie to me
When you use to tell me I am on your mind
I know I am nothing to you
And you don’t care if you have me in your life
But to me you are everything
And I don’t know why
So I sit here with u on my mind
and wonder why
Was it the first time I saw u
Or when I last looked in your eyes
I was lost for words when I kissed you
And simply lost when I said goodbye
Sucks to be me
And you’re the reason why

HAHAHAHA...corny shit dog. i did this shit when i was a virgin and broke up with this chic...haha...

[ezbreezyfresh]

And how often is it that u see me and where?

can't say coz then will know for sure who i am..

[vin r]

can't say coz then will know for sure who i am..

How about u give me a clue

[Siesta]

So did you stop writing? Post some more homie
I asked a question there Vin^^^^...did you not see it?

[vin r]

I asked a question there Vin^^^^...did you not see it?

I'm srry ...nah I haven't really written anything good

[Siesta]

I'm srry ...nah I haven't really written anything good
well keep working on it

[Scorpio666]

Here something I put together on my spare time, ladies enjoyyy !


Dedicated to all the ladies who are DOWN with true Love and Lovin !


(Verse 1- Lova boi 1)

Aint it funny when I tell ya,
neva to late to reach dem stars,
if ya down, Ill heal dem scars !
Lets take dis journey togetha,
yo heavy heart will weight less then a featha,
when im done with ya,
youll be down for me thru any weatha !
So lets escape this very moment,
I can be ya 007 agent,
makin love to ya ery wakin moment,
total agreement, ready fo real commitment,
leavin me down wid only one comment,
im lovin ya fo ery moment,
here and there and then and down !


(Chorus)

So baby dont worry, I be ya only,
promise ya neva be loney,
even if the sky is fallin down ;) !

So baby dont worry, I be ya only,
promise ya neva be loney,
even if the sky is fallin down ;) !


(Verse 2 - Lova boi 2)

Ladies, ya wanna call me baby boy,
but I remind ya, I am no toy,
heart harder to conquer then Troy !
Got me writing sweet like honey,
so down, aint it a bit funny,
my feelings buzzin like a bee,
wondering when ya nex wanna see me !
I know ladies thinking tha was cute,
seems im on a roll, constant pursuit,
dont be shy, let me see ya without da suit,
I know ya down, down down down,
makin love to ya likea music note,
play ya body all night likea magic flute,
with kisses tastin like strawberry fruit !


(Chorus)

(Verse 3- Lova girl 1)

Boi im shinin from above,
yo one and only baby dove,
fighting for ya,
on dis battle field of love !
They can neva eva eva tear us down,
ima make sure you neva eva frown,
real wifey to the end, im your best friend,
neva need anotha, thaz the new trend,
respect is how I send ya of in da end !
Golden to the core, but not a Midis,
my lovin you best be down to try dis !
We can take it further then Bonnie n Clyde,
they just lovaz, I can be ya bride,
more then jus a lova, neva lied,
your my pride n Im yo inside,
locking hearts as we eyed, ready to collide !

[sheisagoodgirl]

i was a lil upset so i wrote this poem about this girl i know its a lil corny and im not a poet but i like it tell me wat u think....


I try to distance myself from you
But for some reason u stay on my mind
I don’t know why you use to lie to me
When you use to tell me I am on your mind
I know I am nothing to you
And you don’t care if you have me in your life
But to me you are everything
And I don’t know why
So I sit here with u on my mind
and wonder why
Was it the first time I saw u
Or when I last looked in your eyes
I was lost for words when I kissed you
And simply lost when I said goodbye
Sucks to be me
And you’re the reason why

good stuff... straight from heart it seems...