peoms

[vin r]

i was a lil upset so i wrote this poem about this girl i know its a lil corny and im not a poet but i like it tell me wat u think....


I try to distance myself from you
But for some reason u stay on my mind
I don’t know why you use to lie to me
When you use to tell me I am on your mind
I know I am nothing to you
And you don’t care if you have me in your life
But to me you are everything
And I don’t know why
So I sit here with u on my mind
and wonder why
Was it the first time I saw u
Or when I last looked in your eyes
I was lost for words when I kissed you
And simply lost when I said goodbye
Sucks to be me
And you’re the reason why

[vin r]

bfore anyone says anything i know i spelt the tittle wrong it should say poems sorry

[amani]

it is very cute, i like it a lot. sorry some girl is being a bia bia to you.

[amani]

it's really sad, too. omg. :crying:

[brownieman]

emo, move on

[reggie_xox]

urgh I don't know why people get all emotional and in love, if the girl hurt you why on earth are you still weeping over her? She obviously isnt worth the time darling, build a bridge...- you know the rest.

[~whatever~]

It's not bad, but i really like the last two lines ..

Suck to me be
And you're the reason why.


Catchy to say the least. haha

[htown_pimpette]

i was a lil upset so i wrote this poem about this girl i know its a lil corny and im not a poet but i like it tell me wat u think....


I try to distance myself from you
But for some reason u stay on my mind
I don’t know why you use to lie to me
When you use to tell me I am on your mind
I know I am nothing to you
And you don’t care if you have me in your life
But to me you are everything
And I don’t know why
So I sit here with u on my mind
and wonder why
Was it the first time I saw u
Or when I last looked in your eyes
I was lost for words when I kissed you
And simply lost when I said goodbye
Sucks to be me
And you’re the reason why

wow yo das deep like ferreal.... i like it homie:-D