My FIRST SINGLE... Yup yup it's OFFICIAL!!

[Bak Squad]

Ladies and gentlemen, with great pleasure I finally present to you the long awaited song from yours truly.... Bak Squad entitled "Deep Down Inside" feat. my boy MO b.k.a. A-killa.... and LK (my rap name... L.yrical K.ing)... so yeaah here it is alongside the lyrics... Lemme know what you think n EnJoY!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=584396

Lyrics:

bak productionz
yeahhhh c'monnn
its your boyyyy, the one and only
LK..
deep down inside, 2006 ... talk to 'em mannn
Let's goooo, cheaaa

[chorus] A-killa
Deep down Inside I wanna love
(I wanna love you girl)
Deep down Inside, I wanna touch
(Caress on that body)
Deep down inside, I wanna care
(all my life)
Deep down Inside, I will be there
(right by your side)

[BaK Squad]
deep down inside i wanna kiss i wanna touch
i wanna hug, i wanna show u my love,
i wanna show u how much i really care
prove to you that ill allways be there
life aint fair, ya need a man by your side
someone to love you and treat you right
be there for you, every day and night
and treat you like a queen for all my life
you love is what I need, your lust is what I breathe /
My soul cries without you, it hurts and bleeds /
as I proceed to make moves and show my love /
you'll be my number 1, place you all above /
give you everything ya need and deserve /
Like 5-0, I'll protect you and serve /
It's painful when these mixed feelings collide /
only if you can see how I feel deep down inside...

[chorus]
Deep down Inside I wanna love
(I wanna love you girl)
Deep down Inside, I wanna touch
(Caress on that body)
Deep down inside, I wanna care
(all my life)
Deep down Inside, I will be there
(right by your side)

[Bak Squad]
Verse two, you already know how I do/
I know I'm busy creepin' and sneakin' with my crew /
But I need you, you're the missing piece from the puzzle /
I know I didnt get time for you when I was on my hustle /
I miss the way we talked, miss the way you gazed /
Your beauty was astounding,had me shook and amazed /
This is not just a phase, this is true from the heart /
I should've been a beter man and careful from the start /
Imma play my part and do you right /
We can cruise town or we can spend the night /
anything you want, baby girl just name it /
carry my arm around you, even if i become famous /
the name is LK, and i have nothing to hide
and that is how I feel... .deep down inside

[chorus]
Deep down Inside I wanna love
(I wanna love you girl)
Deep down Inside, I wanna touch
(Caress on that body)
Deep down inside, I wanna care
(all my life)
Deep down Inside, I will be there
(right by your side)

[Bak Squad]
Girl we' been through a lot for it to end like this /
How I miss your touch and the way that we kissed /
How you gave me bliss and everything I needed /
I had a hunger for true love, and you were there to feed it /
I need you, can't let ya go from here /
even if you wan to, girl I don't care /
I'll be there when you need a shoulder to cry on /
This is not just a plead from me, this is my song /
so we should get a long and let the past just slide /
by now you should know how I feel deep down inside

deep down inside

bak productionz

this is just the beginning...

yeah

(c) 2006-2007 Bak Productionz... All Rightz Reserved !

[Social_larki]

hey i won't lie that was aright...cause ur part is good...BUT that guy who says the chorus..the one who is saying.."deep down inside" that sux :ugh:.. cause his voice is weird...

[crayzee]

hey i won't lie that was aright...cause ur part is good...BUT that guy who says the chorus..the one who is saying.."deep down inside" that sux :ugh:.. cause his voice is weird...

yeh....i totally agree.... LK's bit's gd, but the guy singin the chorus, i think he was too close to the mic or sumfin coz it didnt turn out gd

[Bak Squad]

lol damn for reaaal, but see the thing is I had this chorus done quite some time ago, all i needed to do was lay down the verses which I just recently did and my boy is actually real busy himself so that's why we couldn't do it over... oh well, atleast I see u guyz think its pretty good (my part) so thats wussup, thanks

[illomatic]

lol *ni*gga, u know that was you singing! dont front!!!

[jibran251]

Uh............I'm like Dr. Dre or P. Diddy or that dame dummy guy (damon dash)
Heck I'm even LA reid ...........I know talent.

and All I gotta say is that it was a good try. BUT you won't make it............................No hard feelings. I'm not a hater I'm just a dis-believer.

But if you do make it feel free to say jibran, I made it. Thats why I'm makin millions and your not.........or whatever you wanna say. The lyrics are pretty good though, but you got that desi style that will never.......................................ever get you signed. Desis for reason stretch the words out to much. or ...................I dun't know how to explain it.













but then again what do I know. I only heard 1 song. POst some more and i'll give you feedback.

[Bak Squad]

lol *ni*gga, u know that was you singing! dont front!!!

lollll... Haha.... nah i was the one speaking in the background.... word 2 motha man, that was my boy, U can tell because his voice is deeper !

[Bak Squad]

Uh............I'm like Dr. Dre or P. Diddy or that dame dummy guy (damon dash)
Heck I'm even LA reid ...........I know talent.

and All I gotta say is that it was a good try. BUT you won't make it............................No hard feelings. I'm not a hater I'm just a dis-believer.

But if you do make it feel free to say jibran, I made it. Thats why I'm makin millions and your not.........or whatever you wanna say. The lyrics are pretty good though, but you got that desi style that will never.......................................ever get you signed. Desis for reason stretch the words out to much. or ...................I dun't know how to explain it.











but then again what do I know. I only heard 1 song. POst some more and i'll give you feedback.


LOL, well I am a DESI so yah its in my BLOOD, but i did it just for the heck ot it and fun, no harm in that, the first verse i think came out hottt, the other 2 were good but could've been better.... Hopefully im gunna be made, just not in this line of business....ya digg my friend?!

[x$aira786x]

yeh that guy who sings the chorus doesnt do the song justice
reminds me of an ll cool j style song lol

[cunninglinguist]

you need someone who can actually sing for the chorus

[di vinci]

the tune needs tweaking

[jibran251]

LOL, well I am a DESI so yah its in my BLOOD, but i did it just for the heck ot it and fun, no harm in that, the first verse i think came out hottt, the other 2 were good but could've been better.... Hopefully im gunna be made, just not in this line of business....ya digg my friend?!
I mean yeah..................


you should still make some more. You don't know what could happen. make some mixtapes.

[Drummer_Boy]

lol i love how rappers OVER-COMPLICATE things like asking people to check their song out

instead of a simple, hey guys check out my tune

you have

yo yo dawg is yo homeboy blah blah blah AKA blah blah blah laying out some fresh tunes out for yo FEATURING my other home boy and his home boys blah blah blah yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo

jesus man

[Bak Squad]

lol i love how rappers OVER-COMPLICATE things like asking people to check their song out

instead of a simple, hey guys check out my tune

you have

yo yo dawg is yo homeboy blah blah blah AKA blah blah blah laying out some fresh tunes out for yo FEATURING my other home boy and his home boys blah blah blah yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo

jesus man

lol dude listen to yourself.... you don't make any sense when you say that.. I said..."Ladies and gentlemen, with great pleasure I finally present to you the long awaited song from yours truly.... Bak Squad entitled "Deep Down Inside" feat. my boy MO b.k.a. A-killa.... and LK (my rap name... L.yrical K.ing)... so yeaah here it is alongside the lyrics... Lemme know what you think n EnJoY!"... that in no way complicates things and is about as simple as it gets.

Also, it is nothing like "yo yo dawg is yo homeboy blah blah blah AKA blah blah blah laying out some fresh tunes out for yo FEATURING my other home boy and his home boys blah blah blah yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo"

C'monn man, if you wanna criticize me, atleast make some sense for god sakes... jesus!

[Drummer_Boy]

well i wasnt just criticizing you, i was just talking about rappers in GENERAL. you just reminded me OFF them

[fragiledoll]

wowwww... that means in the coming next year you will be popular like Juggy D and Bally Sagoo? wow u r doing a great stuff.. i wish i could do sumthing like that i love singing... gona listen to yr song no matter how or whati t sounds i am sure you will be good n better n best then don't forget us :p

[lilmiss88]

hey..

i listened to the tune... it wasent so bad,
exept that dude singing... :roflbow:
i think u ve to find urselfe another singer b4 u release this single..

but other than that the song was great.
Good luck n keep it up yeah?:thumrigh:

[samerakalo]

Ladies and gentlemen, with great pleasure I finally present to you the long awaited song from yours truly.... Bak Squad entitled "Deep Down Inside" feat. my boy MO b.k.a. A-killa.... and LK (my rap name... L.yrical K.ing)... so yeaah here it is alongside the lyrics... Lemme know what you think n EnJoY!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=584396

Lyrics:

bak productionz
yeahhhh c'monnn
its your boyyyy, the one and only
LK..
deep down inside, 2006 ... talk to 'em mannn
Let's goooo, cheaaa

[chorus] A-killa
Deep down Inside I wanna love
(I wanna love you girl)
Deep down Inside, I wanna touch
(Caress on that body)
Deep down inside, I wanna care
(all my life)
Deep down Inside, I will be there
(right by your side)

[BaK Squad]
deep down inside i wanna kiss i wanna touch
i wanna hug, i wanna show u my love,
i wanna show u how much i really care
prove to you that ill allways be there
life aint fair, ya need a man by your side
someone to love you and treat you right
be there for you, every day and night
and treat you like a queen for all my life
you love is what I need, your lust is what I breathe /
My soul cries without you, it hurts and bleeds /
as I proceed to make moves and show my love /
you'll be my number 1, place you all above /
give you everything ya need and deserve /
Like 5-0, I'll protect you and serve /
It's painful when these mixed feelings collide /
only if you can see how I feel deep down inside...

[chorus]
Deep down Inside I wanna love
(I wanna love you girl)
Deep down Inside, I wanna touch
(Caress on that body)
Deep down inside, I wanna care
(all my life)
Deep down Inside, I will be there
(right by your side)

[Bak Squad]
Verse two, you already know how I do/
I know I'm busy creepin' and sneakin' with my crew /
But I need you, you're the missing piece from the puzzle /
I know I didnt get time for you when I was on my hustle /
I miss the way we talked, miss the way you gazed /
Your beauty was astounding,had me shook and amazed /
This is not just a phase, this is true from the heart /
I should've been a beter man and careful from the start /
Imma play my part and do you right /
We can cruise town or we can spend the night /
anything you want, baby girl just name it /
carry my arm around you, even if i become famous /
the name is LK, and i have nothing to hide
and that is how I feel... .deep down inside

[chorus]
Deep down Inside I wanna love
(I wanna love you girl)
Deep down Inside, I wanna touch
(Caress on that body)
Deep down inside, I wanna care
(all my life)
Deep down Inside, I will be there
(right by your side)

[Bak Squad]
Girl we' been through a lot for it to end like this /
How I miss your touch and the way that we kissed /
How you gave me bliss and everything I needed /
I had a hunger for true love, and you were there to feed it /
I need you, can't let ya go from here /
even if you wan to, girl I don't care /
I'll be there when you need a shoulder to cry on /
This is not just a plead from me, this is my song /
so we should get a long and let the past just slide /
by now you should know how I feel deep down inside

deep down inside

bak productionz

this is just the beginning...

yeah

(c) 2006-2007 Bak Productionz... All Rightz Reserved !

:p :p :p

black gangsters wanabes

[sikh-si]

its good to be honest..soo i personally didnt find it very entertaining..no offence ...but keep trying and good luck to u :-)

[Bak Squad]

its good to be honest..soo i personally didnt find it very entertaining..no offence ...but keep trying and good luck to u :-)

Thanks man, see this kinda feedback I dont mind... its like you're being honest about it, but you're still encouraging somone to do better.... I wish more people could be like you... but I appreciate it.

[Bak Squad]

so yeah its pretty crap
especially the deep down inside dude should retire pretty soon

So yeaah... this wasn't recorded in a REAL studio and I used a computer program.... the chorus was recorded quite some time ago... and i laid down my verses in less than 20 minutes... so basically I didnt have all the resources and I KNOW the quality needs much work... so yeah I don't care... it is w/e

[Deepak]

Sup LK? good to see more desi mc's puttin in work....

still tipsy off the belvi haha so yeah check itttt

real smooth beat....u make that?....it's nice....the background sample is koo too homie....

Hook: hahah no hate man i an't feelin it, just doesn't match up nor fit right imo.....

Verses: I think you came pretty nice dude, the lyrics seemed precise and well focused....the first verse sticks out as the best of the three in my opinion....you put more emotion into that one....i really like this beat tho has that old school vibe to it and the sample creeps up nicely.....

keep up the good work cutty...

hit me back with some feedback

http://forums.ratedesi.com/showthread.php?t=180824

[Bak Squad]

Sup LK? good to see more desi mc's puttin in work....

still tipsy off the belvi haha so yeah check itttt

real smooth beat....u make that?....it's nice....the background sample is koo too homie....

Hook: hahah no hate man i an't feelin it, just doesn't match up nor fit right imo.....

Verses: I think you came pretty nice dude, the lyrics seemed precise and well focused....the first verse sticks out as the best of the three in my opinion....you put more emotion into that one....i really like this beat tho has that old school vibe to it and the sample creeps up nicely.....

keep up the good work cutty...

hit me back with some feedback

http://forums.ratedesi.com/showthread.php?t=180824

My bad i didnt getta chance to hit u back right away.... Thanks for all the positive feedback, I appreciate it.... I dont actually remember how I got the beat but got it QUITE some time ago... i think it was off a hiphop site or something that offfered free instrumentals or w/e.... but yeah ur right that my 1st verse sticks out the most... thats actually what the guy who did the hook on the song told me as well.... Nd yes I agree with you, the beat has a smooth vibe and the way the ADLIB comes in is nice and makes the song flow smoothly no doubt.... Aight Much Respect fAMZ... Later