Rate Desi Legends

[Arshy]

Dedicated to RD's FreeStyle Crew, These guys have some serious talent, so lean back and pay attention.....

Reach me in my vision, tha precision of RD's emcees neva fail to cease,
you got talent arriving at tha door in tha truckloads, pay homage mothafuckaAZ, recognise proffasee,
so u betta witness, wit sublime skill, line after line, a Zealanda hit em wit his verbal rhymes,
str8 to tha point, no beatin tha bush, Vimi aint holding back, he lappin his prime,
eradicatin peeps wit shattered spines, he feels like the bitches worship his shrine,

Save this space for brit lyricists, got ya mind in a twist, hurry up and bury the herb,
just like weed, up in smoke, dedicate this mutha to dici who serves,
an ounce of quality each time he writes, representin tha south,
Don droppin it hot, wit tha mic stuck to his mouth,
and a big shout to tha new comer sly, ur flows are like bomb'z so get ready to die,
Brave Kaseem findin new ways to chase tha paper,
so manY stabbers, i hear ya'Say fuck tha haterz,

Two of the vets, from tha canadian soil, bring so much drama, make ya blood boil,
GT Starr lost in his books, drop us a line, wit ya nas approach ah shit ...he made you look,
not forgettin tha reason ov battle, if weren't for u, i'd roast this cattle,
sparkin fury but RD's favourite, yo HYDRO we all bear witness,
u got tha ball rollin, fuck businessmen, Maan ur tha business!!!

Aymish and Emon, MASH, KHANVERSE, GREEN POTATO, SpeeDz, Asianrappah, Midnight heat, Beazy....this is also dedicated 2 y'all!!!!

Special mention 2 da new comer Pakistanmanz for his beatboxing skills

[FTJfag]

That was beautiful, man.

[Arshy]

That was beautiful, man.
whats up maan, are into freestyling?

[notoriou$punjabi]

haha

[CremeDeLaCreme]

*shakes head at UK rap scene*

[Arshy]

*shakes head at UK rap scene*
it aint a rap scene and it aint just uk either.....

It's a dedication to some guys who have been posting in one of tha longest threads in RD history....thas all!!!

Don't front!

[pakistanmanz]

Not bad, not bad. Can I join. :dance3:

[hindu_heat]

have you heard centoundici's rhymes, that kid can lay it down.

[CremeDeLaCreme]

*shakes head at Mancunians*

[Arshy]

have you heard centoundici's rhymes, that kid can lay it down.
i've included him in my freestyle (dici)

[Dutty Dutty LuV]

:love: mash, hydro, Emon, Khanverse.

[Arshy]

*shakes head at Mancunians*
hahaha i feel ya KAi....

[Arshy]

:love: mash, hydro, Emon, Khanverse.
no doubt, some good dudes right there!!!

p.s aint that R.J's sig?

[Arshy]

Not bad, not bad. Can I join. :dance3:
join what bruv?

[Dutty Dutty LuV]

yeh the bitch pays me to keep it on... go figure :Paper:

[Speedz]

and i joined in 2005...for what...im not even in that bloody rap :no:

[pakistanmanz]

join what bruv?

The RD Freestyle Crew.

[Arshy]

yeh the bitch pays me to keep it on... go figure :Paper:
ya paper chaser!

:wavey:

[Arshy]

and i joined in 2005...for what...im not even in that bloody rap :no:
ur in!

[Arshy]

The RD Freestyle Crew.
submit a freestlye here... http://forums.ratedesi.com/showthread.php?p=5369797#post5369797

and ill get u in!!!!

[kaseem]

Dedicated to RD's FreeStyle Crew, These guys have some serious talent, so lean back and pay attention.....

Reach me in my vision, tha precision of RD's emcees neva fail to cease,
you got talent arriving at tha door in tha truckloads, pay homage mothafuckaAZ, recognise proffasee,
so u betta witness, wit sublime skill, line after line, a Zealanda hit em wit his verbal rhymes,
str8 to tha point, no beatin tha bush, Vimi aint holding back, he lappin his prime,
eradicatin peeps wit shattered spines, he feels like the bitches worship his shrine,

Save this space for brit lyricists, got ya mind in a twist, hurry up and bury the herb,
just like weed, up in smoke, dedicate this mutha to dici who serves,
an ounce of quality each time he writes, representin tha south,
Don droppin it hot, wit tha mic stuck to his mouth,
and a big shout to tha new comer sly, ur flows are like bomb'z so get ready to die,

Two of the vets, from tha canadian soil, bring so much drama, make ya blood boil,
GT Starr lost in his books, drop us a line, wit ya nas approach ah shit ...he made you look,
not forgettin tha reason ov battle, if weren't for u, i'd roast this cattle,
sparkin fury but RD's favourite, yo HYDRO we all bear witness,
u got tha ball rollin, fuck businessmen, Maan ur tha business!!!

Aymish and Emon, MASH, KHANVERSE, GREEN POTATO, Asianrappah, Midnight heat, Beazy....this is also dedicated 2 y'all!!!!


aight, aight, aight, im a try control my self here !

does my camio appearance not warrant a mention :no: id like to think i contributed in this historic thread..

im a legend to be :lol:

[Speedz]

ur in!
:D:D...:rofl: great stuff now that rap is perfect

[pakistanmanz]

submit a freestlye here... http://forums.ratedesi.com/showthread.php?p=5369797#post5369797

and ill get u in!!!!

But I dnt use words, but beatbox. I can freestyle beatbox though.

[pakistanmanz]

Hey, heres my beatboxing if u want it, its poor quality recording. Its me freestyleing and beatboxing and singing at the same time.

http://media.putfile.com/ME-44

[Arshy]

aight, aight, aight, im a try control my self here !

does my camio appearance not warrant a mention :no: id like to think i contributed in this historic thread..

im a legend to be :lol:
how cud i.....

lemme add ya!!!!

[Speedz]

Hey, heres my beatboxing if u want it, its poor quality recording. Its me freestyleing and beatboxing and singing at the same time.

http://media.putfile.com/ME-44
good stuff...need a better mic though :rofl: ... cos that shit is fucked...aint that singing like rahzel's ... :sarb:

[Arshy]

Not bad, not bad. Can I join. :dance3:
i given u ya own section,

coz u bring sumin diff to the game, but like speeDz said get yaself a decent mic!

[pakistanmanz]

good stuff...need a better mic though :rofl: ... cos that shit is fucked...aint that singing like rahzel's ... :sarb:

Yeh bruv. Rahzels if ur mother only knew. U no abit of beatboxing. But it was just quick on my phone.

[kaseem]

how cud i.....

lemme add ya!!!!


thats love right there :D

[kaseem]

Hold up,i just read it ! LOL how you gonna do me like that i aint no Youngster :no: come on Arshy sort it out !

[Arshy]

Hold up,i just read it ! LOL how you gonna do me like that i aint no Youngster :no: come on Arshy sort it out !
haha u make me laff maan

ayt hold up...

[kaseem]

haha u make me laff maan

ayt hold up...

AW Respect for that Brave hearts :yes: reach me from a distance blood (touch respect ) :p

[King Ghidra]

King Ghidra>*

Watch this space......

[slyguy2005uk]

Dedicated to RD's FreeStyle Crew, These guys have some serious talent, so lean back and pay attention.....

Save this space for brit lyricists, got ya mind in a twist, hurry up and bury the herb,
just like weed, up in smoke, dedicate this mutha to dici who serves,
an ounce of quality each time he writes, representin tha south,
Don droppin it hot, wit tha mic stuck to his mouth,
and a big shout to tha new comer sly, ur flows are like bomb'z so get ready to die,



Nice one dude! all iv got on this site with my skills is hate so i respect u for droppin me in.

Peace out Keep doing ur thing.

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[PakiRican]

enammm is garbage

[King Ghidra]

King Ghidra>*

Watch this space......

oh this is rap...

Ghidra<*

[asianrappah05]

Dedicated to RD's FreeStyle Crew, These guys have some serious talent, so lean back and pay attention.....

Reach me in my vision, tha precision of RD's emcees neva fail to cease,
you got talent arriving at tha door in tha truckloads, pay homage mothafuckaAZ, recognise proffasee,
so u betta witness, wit sublime skill, line after line, a Zealanda hit em wit his verbal rhymes,
str8 to tha point, no beatin tha bush, Vimi aint holding back, he lappin his prime,
eradicatin peeps wit shattered spines, he feels like the bitches worship his shrine,

Save this space for brit lyricists, got ya mind in a twist, hurry up and bury the herb,
just like weed, up in smoke, dedicate this mutha to dici who serves,
an ounce of quality each time he writes, representin tha south,
Don droppin it hot, wit tha mic stuck to his mouth,
and a big shout to tha new comer sly, ur flows are like bomb'z so get ready to die,
Brave Kaseem findin new ways to chase tha paper,
so manY stabbers, i hear ya'Say fuck tha haterz,

Two of the vets, from tha canadian soil, bring so much drama, make ya blood boil,
GT Starr lost in his books, drop us a line, wit ya nas approach ah shit ...he made you look,
not forgettin tha reason ov battle, if weren't for u, i'd roast this cattle,
sparkin fury but RD's favourite, yo HYDRO we all bear witness,
u got tha ball rollin, fuck businessmen, Maan ur tha business!!!

Aymish and Emon, MASH, KHANVERSE, GREEN POTATO, SpeeDz, Asianrappah, Midnight heat, Beazy....this is also dedicated 2 y'all!!!!

Special mention 2 da new comer Pakistanmanz for his beatboxing skills
Gud Shit Bruv... Keep Yur Hustle Up

[Arshy]

enammm is garbage
long tyme sare...where ya been?

[Arshy]

Nice one dude! all iv got on this site with my skills is hate so i respect u for droppin me in.

Peace out Keep doing ur thing.

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Gotta give credit where it's due...and u always drop some good lines!

[Arshy]

Gud Shit Bruv... Keep Yur Hustle Up
Cudn't forget YA!!!

[slyguy2005uk]

Gotta give credit where it's due...and u always drop some good lines!

sayf bro' go check my new ish it's on the thread.

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[slyguy2005uk]

Hey, heres my beatboxing if u want it, its poor quality recording. Its me freestyleing and beatboxing and singing at the same time.

http://media.putfile.com/ME-44

Okay don't sing str8 up cuz u can't! your beatboxing is alright still! The best bit about it all is the chick at the start of it, she has a nice voice.

1

[pakistanmanz]

Okay don't sing str8 up cuz u can't! your beatboxing is alright still! The best bit about it all is the chick at the start of it, she has a nice voice.

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Fuck u, ur a prick. Thats my sister.

[King Ghidra]

Fuck u, ur a prick. Thats my sister.

ahahahahhahahaha

[kaseem]

Okay don't sing str8 up cuz u can't! your beatboxing is alright still! The best bit about it all is the chick at the start of it, she has a nice voice.

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LOL it sounds like drum and base to me

[slyguy2005uk]

Fuck u, ur a prick. Thats my sister.

dude, keep ur penis in ya pants...I said she sounds nice. not that i wanna rip her apart in bed.

[slyguy2005uk]

Your life throws Fury in your direction, prepare for dissection with flows that break MC's and mercifully connect em, a god of men, then fury grows bigger than Ben from the pen stemmed a reply, why try? when dici multiplies his multi-wise while ya'll just sultry lies, Ties with the Khanartists, homey's are heartless, your shit raps wer'e passed it call me Undertaker when I leave you buried in a casket dumping heads in a basket, with swings mastered I can out-rhyme you half dead and plastered you fake bastard

My rhymes~are~misleading I haven’t hit u, yet you’re~still~bleeding,
Stop~pleading, I’ll break ur ribs and take ur heart & Stop~u~from~breathing,
I’m psychotic~dude, I’m hungry I will eat you up like erotic~food,
I know u love gay men and porn shots face it you look Idiotic~nude,
I know you’re A CON* think ur from the GHETTO & a homie,
LOCKED UP crying because u miss ur mum and you’re LONLEY,
U want war I’m always locked~and~loaded, ur so scared ur cock~exploded,
This site isn’t ‘fair’ all u & jus me ur friends have dis voting sh1t blocked~and~coded,
Why u trying to flex~it, Iv seen better rhymes for a man whose~dyslexic,
U can’t rap u jus talk next~Sh1t, how are u ‘heavy’ when ur a confused~anorexic!

[PrOfFaSeE]

the zoolander himself, just put a foot in the door
hold it shut, like u never did before
roastin holstin and toastin like a smore
3 wise men riding up n december 24
the stallion wid a bg ass meddalion
wildin, lootin , shootin, swervin hittin a virgin
like its like that in the back of a back seat of the back we urban
suburban, im that legend, finna hit and pow like a smith and wesson
havin u say all u can say like usher with his confessions
progression, spittin ill, is a predominant allel
in my gene pool, i never seen school
but i can divide
legs and that, with fat cats, like that virgin in the back

[BeaZy]

lol thanks, i never wrote nothin on here cept put up like 2 tracks but

these so called rappers is lame actin when they rappin/
but i aint never scared guns like metal gear clap em wit the mac 10/
im actually stackin, the biggest thing to happen since Bin Ladin hit them two big buildings in Manhattan/

no reason to go hard no homo!

[Hydro786]

fuckin beautiful

nuff respect...big shout outs to Omar, Jose, Aymish, and the only desi to shame me on Rd, Khanverse


*dissapears*

[aymish]

Yo preciate the love, kid
Neva deviate from thug shit
He who hates is bugg-in
Askin for a slug- in his stomach like he was a frenchman
Eyes wide like a dummy before the heats in his vest man
Then one reaches his head, now he left in peace and to rest, damn
They'd rather cease to exist, fam, than try to step on RD
If they test, we leave a hole where their heart be, rip em apart, g, we the best and they not, see... lettin pride be hurt-is-wiser than bein fer-ti-lizer for tha pot seeds

[Laayla]

Smp

[aymish]

Meh, it's alright. I'm not judging the concept, that is deep and concerns you or whoever knows the "legends." I'm only referring to the writing skills.

what's alright?

[MrHarmfulOne]

After reading the first two lines of that rap, I never want to see another rap on this board again.

Unless done by musicchic -_-

[Laayla]

Smp

[Irreligious Left]

You can't spell crap without R-A-P!

[Laayla]

Smp

[aymish]

Rap may be crap when it comes to the mainstream kind. Listen to some underground stuff man..

:yes:

[musicchic33]

you people haven't heard me rap yet, huh? :hand:

[Laayla]

Smp

[musicchic33]

Can't say that I have, but hopefully, I will
in due time, child..in due time :salut:

[Laayla]

Smp

[slyguy2005uk]

Word. I mean, to "dislike" rap in general is to dislike the highest type of art/writing, which is Poetry. The actual "birth" of rap was in Africa when Africans used to recite poetry while playing the drums in the back. So basically, they started speaking along with the beat to "match" the syllabals with the beat. It's not a hard concept to understand. Of course, those who listen to the mainstream kind on radios/TV's, I could see why they dislike rap, since they think that's all it has to offer. -sigh

Dude, this is most interesting post iv read on Ratedesi - Oh apart from some dude with his pic's telling people his a stud. Writing takes a lot of Skill it's more like ART persoanlly i'm a - Text offender - BUT i do write alot of poerty. Rap & writing has alot more to offer then people think. Writin is easy // understanding it is a lot harder.

peace

[$H@MZ]

Dude, this is most interesting post iv read on Ratedesi - Oh apart from some dude with his pic's telling people his a stud. Writing takes a lot of Skill it's more like ART persoanlly i'm a - Text offender - BUT i do write alot of poerty. Rap & writing has alot more to offer then people think. Writin is easy // understanding it is a lot harder.

peace

That makes me dumb then...coz i found it hard to understand your lyrics last night... but hey tell me more i might start learning ;)

[PrOfFaSeE]

i spit something like hydrochloric acid with a mixture of bile
































:| no seriously im sick











:gay: im bored

[Arshy]

Spit spit spit and spit some more,
everytime u knock it, we back for more,

dude get back to tha line, pass me tha MIC im first,
like a possessed soul i spit so fast, feels like i been cursed!

I rip ur stylez from da start till tha end of ya verse,
y'all think ur bad, im so so sick, i'm even worse!

so sick tha cocaine can remain to deliver tha pain,
addiction is tha killa, but Crack's tha name!

Chill ya fuckin feet, but i aint eva been no wet sox,
hit u at a 360, oh shit got u lukin like an Xbox!

im micro kwik ima be micro loud, fuck it G, im str8 micro proud!

Up in ya house i sit on tha top like a loft,
u want no beef, u run out ya windows u MICRO-soft!

i aint no star, but trust me i do smash mouth,
rush 'pon ya neighbours, got u lookin like tha last house!

leave u on tha driveway lookin like u just paZZEd out,
got knocked out, u neva stud a chance, i remain till tha last bout!

[King Ghidra]

Momma says you shouldn't spit, you get spots otherwise.

[don patel]

very very nice dude...
im almost in tears... lol
i wanna get back 2 our battle, but i just aint got the time 2 drop nething these days, wid exams n all... but soon as they dun, im back!
keep up the gd shit man!!!

[CrazyJoker]

pretty nice

[slyguy2005uk]

That makes me dumb then...coz i found it hard to understand your lyrics last night... but hey tell me more i might start learning ;)

dude, i'm tired. Hmmmm maybe one day u will understand the ART of text!

[BeaZy]

whats wit dudes using big words to rhyme to try to seem complicated, i never understood why they do that

[aymish]

I be peelin-these ill-mcs back like skin-disease
Ma ass is in-the-lead, u got no passion jus the greed
I'm attackin, these fucks is weak, dont fuck-with-me
Or your luck-will-be null-i-fied as your skull-is-tried
With sharp lines, u used to the dullest-rhymes
I put "abuse on the mic (mike)" like "Jackson doin lines"
Try ta ruin mine, I got the strongest foundations
You got the wrongest relation with the game an
Ya rhymes disgrace it, straight self-degradation
Ya game is jus eight bit, mine next-generation
Find the ones wit tha lame shit, then lets-segregrate-em
You want respect-than-be-patient
Dont expect-to-be-tastin
Victory if you pickin me to be facin
I rip through mics like they was tissue paper
Bitch ya haters
Can git in place and place-ya-bets, pick ma name to pay-ya-debts:
Ay-mish will be the name-in first place-when the race-ends,
Better to not even waste-ya-breath when you face-the-best or else you be tast-in -death, my rhymes like toothpaste-is-fresh, take-the-test you gon break-I-bet,
You stop here, i'm top tier
No matter where they place-the-rest

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[aymish]

dici, preciate the inspiration (i used a couple of your words cuz i liked how they rhymed with shit, but totally different context as you can see):

Illicit deeds been fillin me i'm killin these soliliquies until i'm free, rippin these mics til they feelin me, spillin these imageries, given these tips in these thoughts that i brought to post, i'm an ill mc, too hot to roast, feel the breeze reverse-its-flow ya hearse-is-slow in arrival but ya words-is-so absurd-ya-show ya nerve-jus-go curse-a-poor-beat wit ya fuckin weak verse,-ya-so-weak, it hurts,-ya-so-meek, ya worse-than-most-*bleep*, dont wanna curse-as-i-leave.

[BeaZy]

^ waht did u win every spelling bee when u was a kid or some shit, where do these guys come from

[musicchic33]

After reading the first two lines of that rap, I never want to see another rap on this board again.

Unless done by musicchic -_-

lollers! :kiss:

I knew you'd get banned again :no:

[nadeet]

dammn bro u juzz killed it ...fuck man.....teach me how to rhyme like U.....
I be peelin-these ill-mcs back like skin-disease
Ma ass is in-the-lead, u got no passion jus the greed

I'm attackin, these fucks is weak, dont fuck-with-me
Or your luck-will-be null-i-fied as your skull-is-tried
With sharp lines, u used to the dullest-rhymes
I put "abuse on the mic (mike)" like "Jackson doin lines"
Try ta ruin mine, I got the strongest foundations
You got the wrongest relation with the game an
Ya rhymes disgrace it, straight self-degradation
Ya game is jus eight bit, mine next-generation
Find the ones wit tha lame shit, then lets-segregrate-em
You want respect-than-be-patient
Dont expect-to-be-tastin
Victory if you pickin me to be facin
I rip through mics like they was tissue paper
Bitch ya haters
Can git in place and place-ya-bets, pick ma name to pay-ya-debts:
Ay-mish will be the name-in first place-when the race-ends,
Better to not even waste-ya-breath when you face-the-best or else you be tast-in -death, my rhymes like toothpaste-is-fresh, take-the-test you gon break-I-bet,
You stop here, i'm top tier
No matter where they place-the-rest

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[GT_Starrr]

nice thread n verse arshy :eek:

I be peelin-these ill-mcs back like skin-disease
Ma ass is in-the-lead, u got no passion jus the greed
I'm attackin, these fucks is weak, dont fuck-with-me
Or your luck-will-be null-i-fied as your skull-is-tried
With sharp lines, u used to the dullest-rhymes
I put "abuse on the mic (mike)" like "Jackson doin lines"
Try ta ruin mine, I got the strongest foundations
You got the wrongest relation with the game an
Ya rhymes disgrace it, straight self-degradation
Ya game is jus eight bit, mine next-generation
Find the ones wit tha lame shit, then lets-segregrate-em
You want respect-than-be-patient
Dont expect-to-be-tastin
Victory if you pickin me to be facin
I rip through mics like they was tissue paper
Bitch ya haters
Can git in place and place-ya-bets, pick ma name to pay-ya-debts:
Ay-mish will be the name-in first place-when the race-ends,
Better to not even waste-ya-breath when you face-the-best or else you be tast-in -death, my rhymes like toothpaste-is-fresh, take-the-test you gon break-I-bet,
You stop here, i'm top tier
No matter where they place-the-rest

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whaaaaaaaaaaaat!!! that was sick!!

[Laayla]

Smp

[!Azeem!]

Emon aka Emoncrew gets my vote

[kaseem]

Limited vocabulary weakens the composition of the verses. Using variety of words to express and describe anything strengthens the perspective. A good key to writing a verse is ALWAYS.. letting the reader FEEL and UNDERSTAND what the writer is talking about. These "complicated" words that you're referring to actually help readers obtain a visual perspective as well. Words such as "bad" and "good" can give LIMITED descriptions while words such as "painful" and "adventerous" are words that explain the nouns more specifically.

Point: Better the vocab, better the verse...

But I do like to point out that many individuals use words that they have no idea about. Don't EVER do that. That makes you look like a complete idiot. I've seen so many verses where words are being misused and most of the time, they don't even make sense and it's not that I don't know the words, but that they do not relate to how they're being used at all.

aight, aight chill lil moesha :lol:

[Laayla]

Smp

[kaseem]

lol.. I uhhh.. don't get it?

you dont know who lil moesha is ?

[Laayla]

Smp

[Arshy]

i just been droppin rhymes and versus, in dedication to y'all i think it's sime to freestyle again...i be back wit some lyrics inabit!

[Arshy]

I be peelin-these ill-mcs back like skin-disease
Ma ass is in-the-lead, u got no passion jus the greed
I'm attackin, these fucks is weak, dont fuck-with-me
Or your luck-will-be null-i-fied as your skull-is-tried
With sharp lines, u used to the dullest-rhymes
I put "abuse on the mic (mike)" like "Jackson doin lines"
Try ta ruin mine, I got the strongest foundations
You got the wrongest relation with the game an
Ya rhymes disgrace it, straight self-degradation
Ya game is jus eight bit, mine next-generation
Find the ones wit tha lame shit, then lets-segregrate-em
You want respect-than-be-patient
Dont expect-to-be-tastin
Victory if you pickin me to be facin
I rip through mics like they was tissue paper
Bitch ya haters
Can git in place and place-ya-bets, pick ma name to pay-ya-debts:
Ay-mish will be the name-in first place-when the race-ends,
Better to not even waste-ya-breath when you face-the-best or else you be tast-in -death, my rhymes like toothpaste-is-fresh, take-the-test you gon break-I-bet,
You stop here, i'm top tier
No matter where they place-the-rest

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just wotch ya mouth before it runs shit, or u might be in need of an upper lip,
might use fresh toothpaste, but ya still st-st-st-studda prick,
u tryna push me off da top tier, but my game in-tact,
i slip fall and flip up like an acrobat!

I got y'all scared to drop rhymes like soap in jail,
u win tha race, nah aymish, thas like seein tha pope in hell,
the bookies lose face when i enter a bet,
won so many prizes, son they call me "The Vet"!

u can't play this, ur shits Ay-miss, run up on honey'z like hey miss,
coz wen i'm up in da room, they tongue's flip like K-swiss,
spittin about winnin this, winnin what son u aint no shooter,
four bitches, foul holes and 1 ov me, might aswell call me The Router!

just caught up wit ur next generation game, Rip out ya chain, while i posses ya brains,
chop tha reigns, while i spit aimless (aymish) names,
u think u got tha sweet beat like a missile flow,
i aint got a foot fetish but damn i like da mistle-toe!

spit so fast, shook ur foundations and got u weak,
so next time open ya mouth when ur asked to speak,
i be tired of fightin and knockin off jaws,
so next time i clap at ya, just call it a round of applause!

Aymish there u go....and welcome back mayN!!!

[kaseem]

lol the only time I've heard of Moesha.. is when that sitcom used to come on TV featuring Brandy as Moesha. That's..it. Wow, I feel slow :(

:applause: :lol:

[Laayla]

Smp

[Laayla]

Smp

[nyc23]

:lurk:

[Arshy]

Your punches are decent, but your word play is weak. Simplicity to its best, though. It seems as everyone concentrates on the punches, but nothing else in the flow. I see no strong structure to this. And your rhyming skills are really basic too.

But anyways, nice punches and multis though.
Cheers .... big ears lol

Give me sum tips on how to tighten up my shit then!

Im always willin to listen, im my own biggest critic, so just tell me how i can improve and ill give it a shot!

[kaseem]

Your applauses hurt me. :(

i feel :ashamed: sowiee

[Snow_Weight]

Dedicated to RD's FreeStyle Crew, These guys have some serious talent, so lean back and pay attention.....

Reach me in my vision, tha precision of RD's emcees neva fail to cease,
you got talent arriving at tha door in tha truckloads, pay homage mothafuckaAZ, recognise proffasee,
so u betta witness, wit sublime skill, line after line, a Zealanda hit em wit his verbal rhymes,
str8 to tha point, no beatin tha bush, Vimi aint holding back, he lappin his prime,
eradicatin peeps wit shattered spines, he feels like the bitches worship his shrine,

Save this space for brit lyricists, got ya mind in a twist, hurry up and bury the herb,
just like weed, up in smoke, dedicate this mutha to dici who serves,
an ounce of quality each time he writes, representin tha south,
Don droppin it hot, wit tha mic stuck to his mouth,
and a big shout to tha new comer sly, ur flows are like bomb'z so get ready to die,
Brave Kaseem findin new ways to chase tha paper,
so manY stabbers, i hear ya'Say fuck tha haterz,

Two of the vets, from tha canadian soil, bring so much drama, make ya blood boil,
GT Starr lost in his books, drop us a line, wit ya nas approach ah shit ...he made you look,
not forgettin tha reason ov battle, if weren't for u, i'd roast this cattle,
sparkin fury but RD's favourite, yo HYDRO we all bear witness,
u got tha ball rollin, fuck businessmen, Maan ur tha business!!!

Aymish and Emon, MASH, KHANVERSE, GREEN POTATO, SpeeDz, Asianrappah, Midnight heat, Beazy....this is also dedicated 2 y'all!!!!

Special mention 2 da new comer Pakistanmanz for his beatboxing skills

Snow is the messed up weirdo legend! :slap:

Remember me!

:idea:

[Arshy]

Snow is the messed up weirdo legend! :slap:

Remember me!

:idea:
nope dont rememba u sorry!

[Rain_Goddess]

Nah man.
True legend

NIRAV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! faack, i miss him.

[BeaZy]

Limited vocabulary weakens the composition of the verses. Using variety of words to express and describe anything strengthens the perspective. A good key to writing a verse is ALWAYS.. letting the reader FEEL and UNDERSTAND what the writer is talking about. These "complicated" words that you're referring to actually help readers obtain a visual perspective as well. Words such as "bad" and "good" can give LIMITED descriptions while words such as "painful" and "adventerous" are words that explain the nouns more specifically.

Point: Better the vocab, better the verse...

But I do like to point out that many individuals use words that they have no idea about. Don't EVER do that. That makes you look like a complete idiot. I've seen so many verses where words are being misused and most of the time, they don't even make sense and it's not that I don't know the words, but that they do not relate to how they're being used at all.
untrue, i can tell, you must be a fan of underground rap lol...
the way a verse is worded with multisyllables matters most than writing the biggest words... tho the vocabulary shouldnt be SO limited like most down south artists, the people on this website do it excessively

[Laayla]

Smp

[21cent]

all da legents r gona like shiznet, soroush, lakeerfan, nirav

[Arshy]

Nah man.
True legend

NIRAV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! faack, i miss him.
wat was nirav's username?

[aymish]

just wotch ya mouth before it runs shit, or u might be in need of an upper lip,
might use fresh toothpaste, but ya still st-st-st-studda prick,
u tryna push me off da top tier, but my game in-tact,
i slip fall and flip up like an acrobat!

I got y'all scared to drop rhymes like soap in jail,
u win tha race, nah aymish, thas like seein tha pope in hell,
the bookies lose face when i enter a bet,
won so many prizes, son they call me "The Vet"!

u can't play this, ur shits Ay-miss, run up on honey'z like hey miss,
coz wen i'm up in da room, they tongue's flip like K-swiss,
spittin about winnin this, winnin what son u aint no shooter,
four bitches, foul holes and 1 ov me, might aswell call me The Router!

just caught up wit ur next generation game, Rip out ya chain, while i posses ya brains,
chop tha reigns, while i spit aimless (aymish) names,
u think u got tha sweet beat like a missile flow,
i aint got a foot fetish but damn i like da mistle-toe!

spit so fast, shook ur foundations and got u weak,
so next time open ya mouth when ur asked to speak,
i be tired of fightin and knockin off jaws,
so next time i clap at ya, just call it a round of applause!

Aymish there u go....and welcome back mayN!!!


“Aymish there u go”-what? That was the LAMEST reply post-FUCK… I was hopin for a dope one to show-up
Ar-shy, you a farce,-see, you green I’ll eat you like par-sley
Me stutter?-Shit… my upper-lip is covered-with a coat of rhymes, the dopest lines, like coke so fine,
Ya game’s-intact, but ya game-is-wack, got the lamest-raps, I’m comin like I’m crazed-wit-gats, u wont be smiling when ya face-is-smacked… the true game-is-back..
You an ac-ro-bat? I’ll smash-ya-act, move the nets and watch ya crack-ya-back,
"Speak when I’m asked-to-speak"… HA you got me laugh-in..- ME? You think you mastered-ME? Bitch I’ll slash-ya-spleen and blast-ya-knees, I’m exact-with-the way I flatten-gs
You not rappin,-please, I’ll leave you rappin-pleas
To not defeat you and leave you as a wack-mc
Sorry son I know ya killed, and not to diss-ya-flow
But ya need ta get wit some skills under ur mistle-toe
You didn’t stand a chance when we clashed man
You “The Router” then route ya ass to the trash can
Quit actin retarded ya bitchass got discarded before the race ever started
Man fuck ya weak raps, what you tryna pull bitch?
U gon welcome me back rhyming all that bullshit?

[don patel]

:Paper:

I'm 2-0 against you.

Third and final soon.



lookin 4ward 2 it dude...
ur soundin on form these days, raised the bar a bit... i need 2 get practicin!
:writers_:

[don patel]

untrue, i can tell, you must be a fan of underground rap lol...
the way a verse is worded with multisyllables matters most than writing the biggest words... tho the vocabulary shouldnt be SO limited like most down south artists, the people on this website do it excessively


its not as if thers nething wrong wid using big words tho, if u can blend them in 2 ur verse and they make sense, y not?...we jus showin sum intelligence...

[Laayla]

Smp

[Arshy]

“Aymish there u go”-what? That was the LAMEST reply post-FUCK… I was hopin for a dope one to show-up
Ar-shy, you a farce,-see, you green I’ll eat you like par-sley
Me stutter?-Shit… my upper-lip is covered-with a coat of rhymes, the dopest lines, like coke so fine,
Ya game’s-intact, but ya game-is-wack, got the lamest-raps, I’m comin like I’m crazed-wit-gats, u wont be smiling when ya face-is-smacked… the true game-is-back..
You an ac-ro-bat? I’ll smash-ya-act, move the nets and watch ya crack-ya-back,
"Speak when I’m asked-to-speak"… HA you got me laugh-in..- ME? You think you mastered-ME? Bitch I’ll slash-ya-spleen and blast-ya-knees, I’m exact-with-the way I flatten-gs
You not rappin,-please, I’ll leave you rappin-pleas
To not defeat you and leave you as a wack-mc
Sorry son I know ya killed, and not to diss-ya-flow
But ya need ta get wit some skills under ur mistle-toe
You didn’t stand a chance when we clashed man
You “The Router” then route ya ass to the trash can
Quit actin retarded ya bitchass got discarded before the race ever started
Man fuck ya weak raps, what you tryna pull bitch?
U gon welcome me back rhyming all that bullshit?

Like a professional Chef, i perfect the beef,
against me u'r designated to get some beats,
How an earth u gonna slash my spleen,
Wen my whole presence is to spit-tha-heat!

sort of like the movies i hustle n flow,
ya rap is chopped like sum1 nut in ya throat,
ya punches is weak, u got nothing to throw,

I keep heat on my waist like i bruised my hip,
tried to walk my path, but my shoes dnt fit,

im still the gifted lyricist spurtin perfection,
Lukin for love? but ya Spit's missin it's personal section,

i'll pay to get rid of u, if all else is lost,
just call me adolf, coz all my hollows-cost (Holocost)

I'm gonna damage ya rep, for ya savage mistake,
u'll be seeing stars with punches, like planets in space,
u can't fathom my bars, my lyrics too deep,
inches won't measure applause, i show u da feet (DEFEAT)!

[BeaZy]

its not as if thers nething wrong wid using big words tho, if u can blend them in 2 ur verse and they make sense, y not?...we jus showin sum intelligence...
reread my post, theres nothing wrong with having a good variety of words to use cuz we wouldnt want every rapper sounding like most down south rappers, but the people on this website are doing it excessively. everybody thinks their Canibus or some shit

[REBELoutionary]

finaly a rd rapper legend thread. wat yall know bout the KHANartists
wat up dici! lemmie get some to some freestyle for yall

Reign

LIVE FOR TODAY SON FUCK TOMORROW/
YOUR LIFE CUT SHORT WHEN THEY BUCK THE HOLLOWS/
EASY TO SEE THAT WE GONNA MAKE IT/
TILL YALL COME OUT AND YOU TRY TO BREAK IT/
COMMERCIAL RAPPERS THAT WRITE SOME FAKE SHIT/
AND HATE WHEN WE COME WITH THE TRUTH AWAKEN/
THE MIC IN MY HAND AS I FIGHT THE HEARTLESS/
WEAPON OF CHOICE BRING LIGHT TO DARKNESS/
THE HARDEST MC'S STARTED TO SEE/
THE PEOPLE AROUND ME SCARRED FROM THE GREED/
TIME FOR A CHANGE I SPIT WIT A PURPOSE/
BRING TRUTH FROM THE UNDERGROUND TO THE SURFACE/
AIM FOR THE TOP AND WE NEVER NERVOUS/
THESE PEOPLE GO PLATINUM BUT THEIR WORDS ARE WORTHLESS/
A CHANGE IS COMIN AND THAT I'M CERTAIN/
LET EM COME TO THE STAGE IMMA CLOSE THE CURTAINS/
IN THE GAME TO THE END/ REIGN WITH THE PEN/
CAME WITH MY PEOPLE I'M HERE TO DEFEND/
FUCK THESE DEVILS I AIM A THESE MEN/
STAY WITH MY TEAM AND RIDE TILL THE END/
THE ReBeL COMIN AT YOU AGE OF 16/
LIVING IN REALITY SO FUCK YOUR DREAMS/
IMMA STAY TRUE TILL THE GAME IS OVER/
NOT A VET YET KID, I REMAIN A SOLDIER!

-ReBeL

[Arshy]

finaly a rd rapper legend thread. wat yall know bout the KHANartists
wat up dici! lemmie get some to some freestyle for yall

Reign

LIVE FOR TODAY SON FUCK TOMORROW/
YOUR LIFE CUT SHORT WHEN THEY BUCK THE HOLLOWS/
EASY TO SEE THAT WE GONNA MAKE IT/
TILL YALL COME OUT AND YOU TRY TO BREAK IT/
COMMERCIAL RAPPERS THAT WRITE SOME FAKE SHIT/
AND HATE WHEN WE COME WITH THE TRUTH AWAKEN/
THE MIC IN MY HAND AS I FIGHT THE HEARTLESS/
WEAPON OF CHOICE BRING LIGHT TO DARKNESS/
THE HARDEST MC'S STARTED TO SEE/
THE PEOPLE AROUND ME SCARRED FROM THE GREED/
TIME FOR A CHANGE I SPIT WIT A PURPOSE/
BRING TRUTH FROM THE UNDERGROUND TO THE SURFACE/
AIM FOR THE TOP AND WE NEVER NERVOUS/
THESE PEOPLE GO PLATINUM BUT THEIR WORDS ARE WORTHLESS/
A CHANGE IS COMIN AND THAT I'M CERTAIN/
LET EM COME TO THE STAGE IMMA CLOSE THE CURTAINS/
IN THE GAME TO THE END/ REIGN WITH THE PEN/
CAME WITH MY PEOPLE I'M HERE TO DEFEND/
FUCK THESE DEVILS I AIM A THESE MEN/
STAY WITH MY TEAM AND RIDE TILL THE END/
THE ReBeL COMIN AT YOU AGE OF 16/
LIVING IN REALITY SO FUCK YOUR DREAMS/
IMMA STAY TRUE TILL THE GAME IS OVER/
NOT A VET YET KID, I REMAIN A SOLDIER!

-ReBeL

Hit u back soon son, sum gud lyrics, gotta jet to work,

LAter